Well Bottom Blues

Oh my God it's full of stars!


No to inhumanism and post-humanism

Answer to Robison Jeffers

To keep one's own integrity, be merciful and uncorrupted
and not wish for evil; and not be duped
By dreams of universal justice or happiness. These dreams will
not be fulfilled.
     – “The Answer”  Robinson Jeffers


A delineated and revised poem.

Yes and yes and yes and yes but no, not duped by despair when rock is sometimes bettered by hand and chisel, the sea frozen on an easel. No to inhumanism and post-humanism.

Your own words are proof against strident inhumanity. Without witness stone is  silent and the meadow flowers have no names. Rock thought moves too slow to notice  their blooms. Stone will never  taste the honey or trace the hawks flight across the bouldered slopes.

The poppy and the lupine  do not live in the memory of silent granite, but in ours because you stood there on the shoulders of railroads.

“We must [no, not] unhumanize ourselves,” who rose up  from that rolling ocean  to stride across continents to stand in awe of the hawk. Do not idolize that raptor’s isolation but rather that he knows his place in the hill-shaped winds, kills only what he needs.

We are not the cancers we decanted in laboratories. We are just another measure  in the song that birthed your beloved hawks.

If symphonies are within  our grasp, let us compose  ourselves and find the trails blazed before us by those  who cultivated a bounteous wilderness, to understand  that man and granite are  all star stuff dreaming a world of blue and  of green. Yes, “we must uncenter our minds from ourselves” and find
a fulcrum as you did, piling up stones to house  your brooding isolation

There is no escape, no place to stand apart on our narrow planetary band of life.If man can find the zero  that counts the boundless  stars and calculates trajectories thereto then we can rise above the horrors from which you hid. We are animals who lived millenia among countless others, sisters and brothers in the delicate green web.



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About Me

Mark Folse is a provincial diarist and aspiring minor poet from New Orleans. His past blogging adventures included the Katina/Federal Flood blog wetbankguide on blogspot.com which David Simon told NY Magazine was one of three blogs that helped inform Treme, and Toulouse Street–Odd Bits of Life in New Orleans, which once outranked the Doobie Brothers on Google Search. His work has appeared in The Dead Mule School of Southern Literature, The New Delta Review, Metazen, New Laurel Review, Ellipsis,  What We Know: New Orleans as Home, Please Forward, The Maple Leaf Rag IV, and A Howling in the Wires (which he co-edited).

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