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Venus  v.  the Barbarians

I’m reading Bill Lavender’s book of poems, City of God, which combines commentary on our modern world and his thoughts on Augustine’s old book. at the same time I have found a blog, Via Negative, which frequently speaks to or shares images of the ancient Venuses whichever on my own mind of late. And somehow out of that, this poem came out.

The Barbarians 

The barbarians (a plundered
conquest word) simply reenacted
the ancestral desert god’s command:
dominion. Desire beaten into a sword
to take and take, disdaining offerings.

Rape as pillage played an important part
in toppling the breast-heavy statuary
of those goddesses who spurned
his thunderbolt and would not submit
to his temperamental iron rule.

The crops still came and they blamed
a hanging God, but not the one who
married  into fertility, gave Her the keys
to the gods' rainbow and Middle Earth
to hang from her harvest-heavy waist.


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About Me

Mark Folse is a provincial diarist and aspiring minor poet from New Orleans. His past blogging adventures included the Katina/Federal Flood blog wetbankguide on blogspot.com which David Simon told NY Magazine was one of three blogs that helped inform Treme, and Toulouse Street–Odd Bits of Life in New Orleans, which once outranked the Doobie Brothers on Google Search. His work has appeared in The Dead Mule School of Southern Literature, Trampoline, Unlikely Stories, Peauxdunque Review, LMNL Anthology, The New Delta Review, Metazen, New Laurel Review, Ellipsis,  What We Know: New Orleans as Home, Please Forward, The Maple Leaf Rag IV, and A Howling in the Wires (which he co-edited).

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